15th February 2010
Dear governor,
I am writing with regard to an article that appeared in the newspaper recently. The article shows how African-Americans are treated in our society nowadays. Because people around them ignored them or blame them for things they had not done. This article claimed that African-Americans are thieves. I strongly disagree with this point of view.
First of all, in modern times everyone should be treated the same way. There should not be discrimination because of a persons skin color or a persons nationality. Till I've read this article a believed I felt like an American, but now I have second thought about the politics of our state.
Secondly, I want to advise you that there has to be an amendment very soon. Also politics should emanate that they are open for everything. There would not be a future for our nation if there is no change. African-Americans are very important for our nation and economy, so why should they be treated in another way?
Finally, I want to affirm once again how important it is that everyone is accepted in this day and age.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ines Peter
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zeigen: the article reveals ...
'because' leitet einen Nebensatz ein - daher kann dieser Teil nicht ein eigener Satz sein
exp. The article reminds us that African-Americas are still ignored or blamed for things they didn't do.
t: The article claims ... (a fact)
exp: in our modern time / nowadays
exp: to be treated equally
g: a person's nationality
t: Until I read this article ... (past tense > past moment in time)
to have second thoughts about ...
exp: emanate (I think the word doesn't fit stylistically here.)
There will be no future... if there is ... (if clauses)
exp: to be treated any different.
Some good phrases.
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