Correction of the first exam

Hof 4
6833 Fraxern
24^th November

board of directors
20b Camp Street
1972 Camping Town

Dear Sir / Madame,

Job application

I’m writing in response to your advertisement for the job as a person who takes care of children.

I’m writing because I’m especially interested in working with children. I’m also a very athletic person and I can also meet deadlines.
Another positive thing is that I’m good at organization.
From 2006 to 2008 I worked in a kindergarten. On weekends I worked as a babysitter in various families.
So I can deal with problems kids can have and I think I also know what they want to do.

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application with you. I look forward to hearing from you and I can be reached at any time.

Yours sincerely, Ines Peter

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Hof 4
6833 Fraxern
24^th November 2008

Dear Joana,

I’m writing this letter, because I want tell you how much problems we have in our family at the moment. Jack hates me, because I’ve told dad about this venereal infection, but I only wanted to help him. So I honestly don’t know what his problem is.
Another problem is dad. I’m really scared of him. I was really appalled when I saw how dad reacted when I told him about Jack’s problem. I also want to tell you about mum. I know that she’s our provider, but we hardly ever see each other, only at night. She wants to talk to me in kitchen, but I’m not interested in such conversations.
One very important thing is the problem between mum and dad. I hope they won’t get divorced, I’m really anxious about that.
My biggest problem is how to solve the problems.
I think I should talk with Jack and apologize that I told dad.
Do you think I should talk with mum, because she’s never at home?
I also should talk with dad, but every time he assumes the worst. The last thing I want to tell you is how to solve their marital crisis. I don’t know a solution for this. In my opinion their biggest problem is that dad often boasts with his sexual exploits in the past. I doubt they will manage it, but I hope so.

I think this letter is boring for you, but I feel happy after talking about it with you.

Love, Ines